User talk:Yui Kasahara/The process to become a Korean Idol

It's good to see that you've endeavored to cover this topic with the details. One quick suggestion is that you should consider this article being relocated within this article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_idol). There are several paragraphs on the idol trainee system, but feel free to improve them. Go over the article and figure out how you want to put your draft in dialogue with the whole article. Also, I assume that you've already gathered a few sources for this topic -- could you also list them in your sandbox? - HK