User talk:Yulah/sandbox

Yulah's Peer Review
when saying "due to the gender role," you might want to reference another wikipedia article that that topic applies to or find a reference for it to give more clarity.

"After turning to 7 years, boys should get other tutors: male tutors" change 'should' to 'would' and maybe add citation.

"But, due to the sexual segregation, they could not." change 'they' to 'many' to indicate that some could but not all. Was segregation here sexual or racial?

"In 1980, women are started to allowed to enroll to the College" women were going to college long before 1980 in the US. edit - 1980 was the point in time when women were able to enroll freely; maybe link statistics of enrollment during this time compared to the decades before. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KP1215 (talk • contribs) 13:55, 26 June 2019 (UTC)

emma's peer review
I feel like you could include more notable women that helped pave the way for women in higher education, or give more information on the women who were already mentioned

I would give a time frame for the first two paragraphs about the gender role — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emmadegrandi (talk • contribs) 14:12, 26 June 2019 (UTC)