User talk:Yule Kang/sandbox

Hkim856 (talk) 14:18, 19 October 2018 (UTC) This is certainly an important topic, and especially since the existing article lacks an in-depth discussion on the recent juncture, your improvement will be really appreciated by the interested. Assuming that you're still working on the draft, I have a few questions for you. How do you plan to write the part on Taiwan? Would you be more interested in the historical development of hallyu (which will need a quite amount of work), or the very recent changes? If the latter, what information are you particularly interested in? Would you be able to incorporate sources from Taiwan?

Yi Xu's Peer Review
I think you did a good job adding information about the current K-pop development in China and Taiwan. Some transitions in the first paragraph could be added to make your paragraph seem more natural and fluent. In addition, more information probably could be added about why China decided not to ban K-pop any more and the reactions from Chinese K-pop fans. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xu388 (talk • contribs) 20:01, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

Whan's peer review
Nice work. I see you used many different academic sources and this will help your article more reliable. Also it is very fact oriented and has neutral view point The case study of China has reliable sources and demonstrates the recent politic impacts on Kpop in China. It will enforce the Wikipedia to have multiple factors playing in Kpop in different countries. I see that you are still working on Taiwan case study. I hope you can keep up with the quality of writings. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sdong930 (talk • contribs) 20:04, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Yujin's peer review
Your work is interesting! I think what you wrote is well-informed about what difficulties K-pop had in China and Taiwan. I suggest that you can add more information about how k pop artists overcame difficulties you mentioned in your article. I think it could make your work more well- constructed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.33.2.89 (talk) 21:04, 31 October 2018 (UTC)