User talk:Yumeng Shao

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Hello, Yumeng Shao, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Draft
Hi! With your draft, make sure that you avoid writing in a persuasive tone. I'm concerned that this is too much like an essay. Things to watch out for are writing from a personal perspective or creating original research (claims or research created by yourself based on the existing sourcing).

Any major claims need to be attributed to the source where they're stated and the person who made them. For example, the following statement needs to be attributed to a source/person along the lines of "According to This Person..."
 * It is hard for international students to identify what is the sexual assaults, because the definition of the sexual assaults can be different between different countries and cultures. 

The question here is who is making that statement, as this can be a controversial claim. Some may agree with it while others would disagree and say that the definition may not differ as much between countries and cultures. Definitely watch out for things like this. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:10, 5 November 2018 (UTC)