User talk:Yummyan

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November 2014
Thank you for your contributions. Please mark your edits, such as your recent edits to Fiona Graham, as "minor" only if they are minor edits. In accordance with Help:Minor edit, a minor edit is one that the editor believes requires no review and could never be the subject of a dispute. Minor edits consist of things such as typographical corrections, formatting changes or rearrangement of text without modification of content. Additionally, the reversion of clear-cut vandalism and test edits may be labeled "minor". Thank you. DAJF (talk) 02:19, 26 November 2014 (UTC)

Inaccuracies and odd wording in Fiona Graham article
Hi, Yummyan. I have reverted your recent edits to the Fiona Graham article, and while I included an explanatory edit summary, I thought you might wish to see in more detail why all three of your changes were problematic. I hope this clarifies why I reverted your edits, but if you still feel I was wrong, please feel free to comment here or on the Talk page of the Fiona Graham article, explaining why you think the current wording is wrong or needs changing. Thanks. --DAJF (talk) 02:42, 2 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Firstly, you added the wording "According to unknown reports quoted by The Wall Street Journal". Apart from the fact that "unknown reports" doesn't make sense (the reports are surely known, even if the sources are anonymous), the news article in question just says "according to reports".
 * Secondly, you changed the wording to read "A member of Asakusa Geisha Association told local reports that..." If you are native English speaker, I don't think it is necessary to explain why this doesn't make sense and does not constitute an improvement over the original wording.
 * Finally, you changed the wording to read "dangerous as a backpacker". In my vocabulary, a "backpacker" is a person, so I'm not sure why a building would be declared "dangerous as a backpacker". Moreover, the news report in question does not use this phrasing, so it does not improve the accuracy of the article.