User talk:Yunxin Song

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Hello, Yunxin Song, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Yunxin's Peer Review
Overall, this article has a neutral tone and draws on a variety of credible sources from the natural and social sciences. The information is well organized, however some sections could be combined under the same heading in order to improve readability. For example, the "mitigation" and "mitigation policies, measures and other strategies" sections could be combined. Additionally, as noted in the article, the examples all draw from the US. The History section is particularly lacking in content. It mentions that first investigated and named the phenomenon but did not name it, but then does not state who did name the phenomenon. — Preceding unsigned comment added by HannahWV (talk • contribs) 03:47, 18 March 2019 (UTC)