User talk:Yunxin Song/sandbox

Article evaluation
By evaluating content, everything in the article is associated with the article topic of Urban Heat Island. The tone of this article is neutral since the article does not have absolute words such as "the best" and "the most important". Throughout the entire article, it does not contain the unreliable statement such as "some people think or believe", which is one of the indicators of the reliable article. Additionally, the article's structure is quite clear because the article arranged by titles and subtitles with appropriate and relevant figures. For example, it provides a figure that shows the temperature trend in Tokyo, to indicate Tokyo is one of the examples of urban heat island. This figure provides a clear understanding for readers. The sources of the article are relevant to the topic and it offers reliable resources which cited throughout the article. However, some information is out of date, which cited from the 20th century. Authors should replace them with up-to-date sources. Furthermore, it is better to add more information regarding case studies of cities that have been experiencing urban heat island and actions those cities took to reduce it.

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Yunxin's Peer Review
Overall, this article has a neutral tone and draws on a variety of credible sources from the natural and social sciences. However, as noted in the article, the examples all draw from the US. The History section is particularly lacking in content. It mentions that first investigated and named the phenomenon but did not name it, but then does not state who did name the phenomenon. — Preceding unsigned comment added by HannahWV (talk • contribs) 03:33, 18 March 2019 (UTC)

Yunxin's peer review
reviewed by Zhux9 Neutral tones and the organised structure. The sentances are easy to understand. The clear subtitles show the main ideas for each section, which are easy to know the information in rough. The whole article gives a clear definitions and explains. Also provides a detailed information.

such a good job!

Yunbing Song's peer review
The urban heat island is a very important part of global warming. In your draft of Urban heat island, you might want to give some examples of cities which experience the problem of urban heat island and talk about how these cities react to the problem of urban heat island. In addition, you could also illustrate where the heat island effect is most severe. Furthermore, you might discuss how human activities impact the weather and how urban heat island has impacts on human health. Moreover, you might compare the difference between urban heat island and urban cold island. You did a good job on providing many reliable sources. The tone is neutral, and the article does not have the bias. The construction of your sandbox is clear by listing headings and sub-headings. Yunbing Song (talk) 04:55, 23 March 2019 (UTC)

Peer review
This is a well constructed draft and wrote in a neutral tone. The sources you used in this draft are all reliable. It is a good idea to rewrite with subheadings rather than a whole paragraph. Moreover, you can talk more about the connections between the human activities effects and the urban heat island. Overall, that's an excellent job! keep going! Jocelyn519 (talk) 17:12, 31 March 2019 (UTC)