User talk:Yussef13/sandbox/sandbox

=Evaluations=

==1/30/2018 Evaluation by User:kyehen/== Spelling Grammar: Meets standard. Change “marginalized” to “marginalised”. That was the only one I noticed, but watch for other British English spellings.

Language: Meets standard. Small mistakes, but overall good.

Organization:Exceeds standard. Fantastic.

Coding: Meets standard.

Validity: Nearly meets standard. The information in the parenthesis can be improved. The terminology/stages for schooling in the US and UK are not the same so they should not be addressed as the same. For example, UK students enter sixth form/ college by 16. Additionally, the first two sentences of your second paragraph should be cited or re-worded because they are biased claims that need support. Other than that, all the information looks great.

Completeness: Exceeds standard.

Relevance: Meets standard.

Sources: Exceeds standard.

Citations:Exceeds standard.

References: Exceeds standard.'''

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard. Like Kyeanna had said before me, "marginalised" should be "marginalized" but that's all I noticed.

Language
Meets standard. Very informative, though maybe it's just me but the first few sentences feel like they could have some better flow.

Organization
Exceeds standard.

Coding
Meets standard.

Validity
Nearly meets standard. Also like Kyeanna had said before me, schooling between the U.K. and the U.S. also has its differences between one another, so they should be looked at separately if you compare them like that. Also, the beginning of your second paragraph either needs some backup via sources/references or needs to be reworded and flipped around a bit because it seems to sound very much like your opinion.

Completion
Exceeds standard.

Relevance
Meets standard.