User talk:Yutuzi/sandbox

Peer Review
Good clear lead. The section about the debate is well written and neutral. Each side of the debate is supported equally.

There were a couple of errors (see below).
 * "underscoring the intellectual role of the artist [in] renaissance society" I think there was a missed word in this sentence.
 * "also asserted a that the understanding of contorni and the ability to render an accurate contour line were technical skills that benefited both mediums." Extra word.

My suggestions going forward would be to extend the list of contributing artists if you can. I would also suggest defining some of the terms you used in the debate section, such as disengo and contorni. It was also mentioned in the lead that architecture was included in the debate, so if you are looking for more to research, you might expand the article to include that side of the debate as well.

Nouradnik (talk) 17:07, 8 March 2019 (UTC)