User talk:Yuuusraz

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Hello Yusra Azhar, I am an online ambassador who you can ask about anything by using my talk page, or email if you do not want others to see what you want to say. I will also be keeping an eye on what what editing you do on Wikipedia in this course, and will lend a hand or have a chat. I hope you enjoy contributing to Wikipedia and can make a difference to our content! Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:00, 24 January 2012 (UTC)

Review 1
Hi Yuuusraz, I have reviewed the Clean Water Act article and it is well written. I do like the fact that some Case Laws have been listed with links to the direct website and also the section with Recent Developments allows for easy addition of new updates in the future. Under the “See Also” title the pages are nicely linked. However, I do kindly suggest the following: i) Checking for other countries in world that have enacted the Clean Water Act or a law similar to it; ii) Addition of some images, pictures, graphs, charts and tables related the Clean Water Act if possible. I think it would help indicate changes since the Bill was passed into law. Under the following headings I think more information is needed: i) Federal Facilities ii) Thermal Pollution iii) State Certification of Compliance iv) POTW Bio-solids Management Program v) Employee protection (summarizing the information into 3 to 5 sentences under each heading will make the page look better). Are there any recent violations of the Clean Water Act by the oil companies within or outside the United States? And if any, how much were they fined for the violation? Am just curious! I hope this helps. --Bravura1 (talk) 23:58, 13 April 2012 (UTC) —

Review 2
After taking a look at the contributions you have made, as well as reviewing the page, there is still some information missing. I understand that this page is still a “work in progress”. I agree with Reviewer 1 and believe that you should add more graphics or images. However, due to the fact that this is focusing primarily on the Clean Water Act in the United States, I disagree with Reviewer 1 and do not think you should compare or check for Clean Water Act in other countries. Additionally, you could elaborate on public drinking water systems along with drinking water contaminants. Perhaps, you could even add information about bio terrorism and homeland security act, because many people are unaware of the fact how important water security is. Moreover, it is vital to mention the safe drinking water hot-line number: 18004264791. You could also mention how the hotline responds to local water drinking quality and drinking water standards. On the other hand, the two paragraphs that you have contributed so far seem to be well written. If you continue to write in the same manner, this page will turn out to be great! Hope this helps. Keep up the good work. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sarqbal (talk • contribs) 14:42, 20 April 2012 (UTC)

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