User talk:Yvlizzle

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Peer Review
It is clear that the subject is condoms and its history. The topics had a very clear structure and the headline matched what was talked about. There was a lot of useful and clear information that the reader can understand. The time periods were correct. Although, there was a clear structure, the early IUD/IUC models and Early Condom Models headlines were similar and could've been condensed into one paragraph. There were a lot of cited sources close together, so it didn't give the write a chance to write in their own words about the subject. Overall, very good and clearly structured paragraphs.