User talk:Yvonne1212

Hi there! I am leaving you a message! (Damatucci (talk) 16:38, 25 September 2012 (UTC))

Welcome to Wikipedia: check out the Teahouse!
I, and the rest of the hosts, would be more than happy to answer any questions you have! SarahStierch (talk) 04:24, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Hi, I am Man Zhu, you could call me Grace!

Wiki Peer Review by Barrie
Hi Yvonne,

Your revisions are very strong. You added a considerable amount to the introduction/ definition. I love that you incorporate links to other wikipedia pages. That is a great use of the medium and I'm definitely going to do the same for my page. Great diagram. You have two sub header within your Onion metaphor section: Breadth & Relationship between Depth and Breath. Consider making these two sections subheadings instead of bullets. You also might want to make the criticism section into a paragraph instead of bullets. I just want you to know that a new user came in this morning and edited a considerable amount on your page. You should consider engaging with this person! Might be interesting to understand the ways you differ in opinion. Great start!

BarrieMichelle (talk) 16:15, 13 November 2012 (UTC)BarrieBarrieMichelle (talk) 16:15, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

peer review
Junya, I think this is a good page overall. It would be better if you can add more internal links to the article.

Ailin7 (talk) 20:01, 12 November 2012 (UTC)

Peer Review DR
Hi, I think this page is pretty well developed. A few ideas for edits:
 * Create a History and Theory section and explain them more
 * I think that new media is discussed to a good degree on the page. Perhaps you could pull in more examples from your literature search to add to the robustness of this page
 * Find and discuss a counterexample of this theory
 * Include the fields of interest (like Barrie has on her Diffusion of Innovation Page)
 * More internal links!

I hope this is helpful! Wikisyzygy (talk) 12:55, 13 November 2012 (UTC)

November 2012
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