User talk:Yw59

Hello,

I was not able to find your sandbox for review. I tried looking for Yw59/sandbox but your page was not there either. Could you provide a link to your page?

Thanks,

Bgwiki15 (talk) 13:58, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Since there was nothing in the sandbox yet, I visit the page for media ecology I see that there is some need for citations. It might also be good to include some criticism of the theory and some additional references. Looks like you have a lot of stuff to work with, so your project should be interesting!

Opheliajw (talk) 14:37, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

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Media ecology page feedback
Yu-wei,

When I look at the history of the Media ecology page I don't see your user name listed for any of the edits; is it possible that you were editing while not logged in or under another user name?

AlbinoFlea (talk) 20:27, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Media Ecology page feedback 2
Yu-wei,

Like I mentioned in class last week, there are plenty of opportunities for linking to other wikipedia articles; here are a few that jumped out at me:


 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Materialist
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_medium_is_the_message
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/F%C3%A9lix_Guattari
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gregory_Bateson
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Manuel_de_Landa
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Telegraph
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Post-structuralist
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edgar_Allan_Poe
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Descent_into_the_Maelstr%C3%B6m

but there are plenty more as well.

It might be good to present each of McLuhan's periods (e.g. Tribal Age, etc.) as a sub-sections under the Media History section.

I also think it might be good to move the Hot vs. Cold Media above the Critics section somewhere.

AlbinoFlea (talk) 19:45, 13 December 2011 (UTC)