User talk:Yzwmn

Sex Rehab with Dr. Drew
Hi, and welcome to Wikipedia. Thank you for your interest and your contributions to the article Sex Rehab with Dr. Drew. Unfortunately, we cannot accept your edit for the following reasons:

First, Wikipedia has a number of policies and guidelines, chief among them WP:Verifiability and WP:No Original Research, which require information to be supported by a source that is both reliable and verifiable, and is cited in the passages as instructed at WP:Citing Sources. The episode in question indicated that the scenes were filmed at Children of the Night, as you yourself mentioned, and that is what the passage mentioned. I reviewed the episode in question again, although Jay Farkas indeed appears in the episode, I could not find any verbal or visual mention of Valley Trauma Counseling Center. The establishing shots of the location showed the Children of the Night logo on the doors of the establishment, Dr. Pinsky referred to the location in narration as "the headquarters of a program called the Children of the Night", and in the establishing shot of the second scene there, he narrates, "Today we're doing art therapy at Children of the Night", so the article's wording was supported by the episode. I also checked the web page you cited, and could not find any reference to the episode. (This would also have run into the problem of self-published sources. I apologize if this seems unreasonable to you, but even if one has personal knowledge that information in an article is inaccurate or incomplete, it is not appropriate to removed material if it supported by a valid source, nor add material based on that knowledge, as that is Original Research, which is prohibited.

Second, I know you're knew here, so it's no big deal this time, but just so you know, the proper place to discuss ways to edit the article, or explain your edits is on the article's Talk Page, which you can view by clicking the discussion tab at the top of the article. Although clarifying a reference in the References section is quite common, it is best to do so with a footnote within the passage, which you can do by placing it inside the opening and closing tags. (Further citation methods are discussed at WP:Citing sources.) However, referencing a specific edit, or "correction" is problematic, because readers will not know what "correction" you're referring to. I'd have fixed this myself for you, except that as aforementioned, there was no source for it. If you do find a source for consistent with the above policies, or if you ever have any questions about editing, do not hesitate to ask me. Thanks, and Happy Holidays. Nightscream (talk) 01:13, 10 December 2009 (UTC)