User talk:Zéliamrlt/Nitrosopumilus

GOOD JOB!!! I would change one thing: the title's order. For example, Taxonomy I would put it first.

Nice work, pay attention to some details
Ciao, here are my recommendations for your article, so you may work in improving it and fixing some minor details:

Overall, you count with solid information, yet some words and phrases contain some minor spelling and grammar mistakes. Try to get help from a native English speaker since some sentences need to be rewritten due to context interpretation, as well as some punctuation marks. Also, you write the name of N. maritimus capitalizing the species name in some cases, and in others you miss the correct format in Italic-type letters Dacastro90 (talk) 13:52, 27 December 2021 (UTC)

More tips for you
Hello. Rereading your article, I notice that you have already followed some of the advice I gave you on December 22nd. I'm glad you found them useful. I propose again to: I also recommend to: Overall, it's a great job! Fra.ac.6 (talk) 14:25, 27 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Combine the paragraph “Genome” with the paragraph “Phisiology”, so as to dedicate a single space to all the metabolic aspects relating to the microorganism;
 * Deepen or otherwise simplify the part about FtsZ and Cdv cell division proteins, which seems a bit difficult to understand, at least to me.
 * Placing "Ecology" as the last paragraph;
 * Adding some images.