User talk:ZHUMAS214

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October 2007
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. One of the core policies of Wikipedia is that articles should always be written from a neutral point of view. Please remember to observe our core policies. Gscshoyru 03:03, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. If you would like to experiment, use the sandbox. Gscshoyru 03:47, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

Please stop. If you continue to violate Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy by adding commentary and your personal analysis into articles, you will be blocked from editing Wikipedia. ''Please stop adding essay-like content to articles. Thanks!'' Gscshoyru 04:07, 24 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Alright, sorry for being so harsh, but the section you keep adding looks very much like your own personal analysis, which is against wiki policy, see WP:OR. However, if you can find more references to back up the claims you make in the section you add, please don't hesitate to put the section back, with the references. Please ask me if you have any questions, and sorry for the rough welcome, so let's do it right: welcome, and happy editing! Gscshoyru 04:53, 24 October 2007 (UTC)


 * The same goes for your addition to Video game culture as well, by the way -- it needs more sources. Gscshoyru 11:41, 24 October 2007 (UTC)


 * I'm having trouble with your edits on Marshall McLuhan as well - there are some grammatical errors for one thing, making it hard to follow in places. The meaning is not clear, and your additions come in the middle of a section that had a certain flow, so I'm not sure they are appropriate  there or needed at all. Perhaps you could discuss what you had in mind on the article's talk page. Tvoz | talk 03:17, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

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You should review this contribution of yours:. It was a good idea to provide a source, but copying the text and presenting it on Wikipedia as your own writing is in violation of its copyright. In future cases where you have interesting information to cite, work to briefly and generally explain the information that you're citing, in your own words, and continue to link to the source. Davewho2 17:32, 27 October 2007 (UTC)

Please stop. If you continue to violate Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy by adding commentary and your personal analysis into articles, you will be blocked from editing Wikipedia. Gscshoyru 01:37, 29 October 2007 (UTC)