User talk:ZNThomas08/The Lost Soul

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Ayo ZNThomas08, Jaysbtg, & KenBoy02! I just finished ur peer review! When u read it, remember that I don't think y'all r dumb- I just wanted to be as direct as possible. See u in class ;) Matakeva (talk) 04:21, 12 April 2022 (UTC)Matakeva

Does this work

I have to put something here Arabellablu8 (talk) 19:43, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

In the summary, take out Matthew or Andrew and just say that he tried to guess what his name was. Arabellablu8 (talk) 19:45, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

In sentence five of the summary you said “lose”. It should be ‘loose’. I think. Lol I was never all that good at spelling. Arabellablu8 (talk) 19:48, 11 April 2022 (UTC)


 * the spelling is right Jaysbtg (talk) 00:25, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

You should add a picture of what you are referring to in the illustration section. Either the type of paper you’re talking about, or a picture from the book. Just something to give the reader a visual representation of what you are talking about. (It will also help your page look more full *wink wink*.) Arabellablu8 (talk) 19:52, 11 April 2022 (UTC)


 * copyright says no Jaysbtg (talk) 00:22, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

I went through and checked that all of your links worked. Everything seemed fine except for #7 and #8 which I couldn’t get my computer to pull up. It might just be that my system is buggy. Who knows ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Arabellablu8 (talk) 20:01, 11 April 2022 (UTC)


 * it's your computer Jaysbtg (talk) 00:27, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

In your very beginning paragraph, is there a page that can be linked to the artist’s name? If there is, you mayhaps might want to put it in. Or not. I don’t mind either way. Arabellablu8 (talk) 20:05, 11 April 2022 (UTC)


 * no page is linked Jaysbtg (talk) 00:22, 12 April 2022 (UTC)