User talk:ZYin/sandbox

I think you have a good start here for your subject, but I agree with Alyssa and Diana; this information is a little heavy on the jargon. This wikipedia post is for a non-science general audience, so it needs to be accessible. Having said that you can add links to wikipedia for some of the jargon terms so people can click the links, and see a definition or wikipedia page about that word(s). Your sources also need to be review papers, books, or non-primary research sources.--Homming2 (talk) 04:45, 23 October 2017 (UTC)