User talk:ZaGreenScene/sandbox

-Olivia Peer Edit- -You should have more reliable sources such as www.bettersource.org or www.reliablesource.edu rather than www.badsource.com - If creating own original article, you need a lot more information

Dylan's peer edit
I like this idea I just hope there is enough information and reliable sources in order to write yourself an article length momento on this topic. I know personally my topics are new and changing everyday so therefore I have taken on the task of editing and updating a few articles at once. Maybe you could consider doing the same and learning more about Dive VR in the process! DylanGoodale (talk) 15:40, 25 April 2018 (UTC)