User talk:ZaMahmood/sandbox

Hi Zainab, great job on your article draft, I think it is well written and clear and I was able to easily understand everything you were saying. I liked how you conveyed all of the important information without being too detailed/complicated and didn't use too much medical lingo (i.e., "other potential diseases" instead of "differential diagnosis"). I enjoyed how concise the different sections were while not sacrificing important information. Feel free to clarify certain terms like "HAART" as many non-medical people might not immediately understand this acronym. Also, in the diagnosis section, I believe the word "increased" should be "increases". Great work! -Jake Jacobmmorton1 (talk) 00:05, 7 December 2020 (UTC)