User talk:ZackNU/sandbox

Hi there,

I see that you've already made a comment on what you have worked on for this article and where you would like to continue developing.

MAJOR POINTS Unclear how the origins and development section ties into nutrition. Article could be strengthen by research exploring the effects and applications of nutrition psychology

MINOR POINTS separate definition of nutrition and psychology into two sentences. sentence, "This is a field that is only just beginning to form and continues to develop currently" is slightly awkward. Consider rephrasing to "This field is in its early stages of development" or something similar. Could start the "origins and development" section with statistics on diabetes then state, "due to the increasing rates of obesity worldwide, nutrition psychology is gaining relevance and popularity in the scientific community

AcevedoBarga (talk) 01:18, 29 March 2016 (UTC)