User talk:Zainachaudhry/Ormuri/Saraphina9666 Peer Review

I suggest providing more information than what is on your draft. And use APA style for your references. The lead paragraph shouldnt be too long but a few detailed sentences. On the original article, the author sectioned off the most important information- lead, history, geographic distribution and linguistic structure. I want to suggest also talking briefly about the Burki people and their tribes. It also says that the language is endangered (which you already know) but another dialect is adopting Ormuri sound inventory due to its geographical surroundings. This is a language most people dont know about so it would be great to get some background information, since it has been impacted so much over the years. It has many sources to read on and collect data from. But I do like what you wrote in your draft- "The first book written in Ormuri was called "Should we leave our language at the deathbed." This was written in Pashto script. [1]". Which is pretty epic in my opinion. So I think this project is going to be great because its already interesting enough.