User talk:Zanthos434/sandbox

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Brett, I think you have some interesting facts gathered, but they don't tie together very well. That will be okay, if there are gaps in the WP article where they will fit, but be sure they pertain to the section you add them to. You might need to add some introductory and explanatory text to fit them in.JAirhart 21:03, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

I like how you added a little bit everywhere throughout the article. You also used some great sources. I'm surprised you found this many sources on the tcc database, I wasn't able to find very many. But good job I think your draft looks great. Zakattak13 (talk) 15:05, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

Draft Feedback Response
I will check into the recommendations and make sure they fit and if not add to make them work.--Zanthos434 (talk) 23:18, 12 March 2019 (UTC)