User talk:Zar36

Your submission at Articles for creation: Charles D. Close School of Entrepreneurship (March 6)
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EROS message 11:00, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Your AfC submission and advertisement
Greetings. There are multiple guides on how to neutralise your "writing style" and tone for Wikipedia so that articles wont seem promotional. They are the blue hyperlinks on your submission page's declination banner. Apart from the history section, most section can be considered as promotional in tone. You introduced the degrees, programs and faculties with the list of BOD which reads like extract from the school's prospectus. To be neutral in tone and non-promotional in tone, it will be best to construct your submission to make it look less like a prospectus. Cheers. EROS message 06:56, 8 March 2018 (UTC)