User talk:Zara.palevani/sandbox

Peer Review: Zara, I like your contribution the Open Data in Canada page! Great job ensuring that the content in the Nova Scotia section is relevant and neutral. I've reviewed your references. They appear to be up-to-date, neutral, and the links are working. I really like the inclusion of the open data contest. It provides a tangible example Open Government in action in a Nova Scotia context. That said, I have a few suggestions for changes and additions:


 * I think it would be useful to include the date Premier McNeil made his announcement to understand the timeframe of Nova Scotia's Open Government initiatives in comparison to other jurisdictions. It may also be valuable to include a few sentences about the government's reasons for launching this initiative and what their objectives may be. Perhaps this is information that can be found in the same source.


 * Similarly, I feel that a couple sentences describing the context and purpose of the portal would enrich this section of the article. This could be modelled off the Albertan section, which describes the types of material that were released to the public.


 * The last sentence is slightly confusing. I think there may be grammatical issues that you would like to review.

Overall, your contributions are very important and valuable. Understanding different approaches in different provinces is very useful! I hope you find my feedback beneficial and thank you for your contribution!

Siobhanquigg (talk) 13:31, 14 July 2018 (UTC)