User talk:Zaraboo

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Hi again, I removed your recent edit to the emotion article. This is not necessarily because I disagree, but because there are two serious problems with your addition.

First of all, the sentence you added is hopelessly vague "Sufficient detail of emotion can't be given unless a huge range of issues related to philosophy of mind, that go far beyond the emotions in specific, are taken into detail."

This sentence contains many unclear words (aka weasel words). (1) Sufficient detail - What is sufficient for what purpose (2) huge range - what constitutes a huge range (3) issues related to philosophy of mind - which issues (4) that go far beyond - what is far beyond? Added all together, the sentence as it is right now has little to no content. So please specify these vague terms.

Secondly, you refer to a library entry of the University of Toronto which is no accessible for people who are not on UToronto campus; and in any case the library entry itself is not your source. Looking at the code I guess you actually refer to a journal paper.

I hope you can have a look at these things and wish you happy editing Arnoutf (talk) 18:36, 10 April 2012 (UTC)