User talk:Zbklein/sandbox

Peer Review Devon Evanovich:

Hi, My name is Devon Evanovich and I really enjoyed your article. I thought the very first part of your article was a little thesis sounding, but if that is just how you are framing you discussion then I see why that is there.

The roots in Islamic endevours I thought was super interesting and wanted to know more about it, but then we started talking about early Spanish botany, which is also cool. Is the Islamic Endeavours a separate section?

I thought the Spanish exploration for spices paragraphs were very fair and well presented for Wikipedia. I have I hard time sounding impartial when I have so many opinions about the sources im presenting. It sounded like I was reading a wiki article so that is good!

There are little grammar things that you just need to re-read and edit for before you publish, but obviously you are not done yet as I See the Ginger Transplantation subheading.

Your sources are good and fair works but you may want to diversify your sources a bit. I noticed out of the three you had two were from the same book.

What of the Spanish people that benefited from the science of the economic botany, what did this allow for that we didn’t previously have, what are some examples of flowers that are now in Spain as a result, crops, or foods that have been developed.

Links work on the citations! You have cited appropriately in this article as well so good job!

Look up the tulip bubble. It was the first economic bubble in history and was caused by tulips, so this is very economic botany.

Add some pictures! You have such a cool and visual topic that I wanted to see some pictures on this article.

Hope this was helpful,

Best, Devon Evanovich (talk) 03:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Devon.evanovich