User talk:Zdeneris/sandbox

Feedback on potential topics
These all look like good articles to work on, especially because previous editors have marked them for mid or high importance.

The Shonen manga article feels like it is missing a lot of the existing literature on the topic and could use some restructuring. What do you think is important to know about the topic? You may find as you're doing the research that there are content gaps here in addition to the problems it has with original research and subjective tone.

Your proposal to add details to each section of the Korean pop idol article meets a real need of the article, since a lot of those sections are quite threadbare in their current forms.

North Korean culture is an enormous topic, so if you decide to work on that article, you may want to choose a couple of specific sections on which to focus. Ctextor at uofu (talk) 04:08, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

Feedback on Project Proposal
This looks great, particularly the source list. Looking at the article, I wonder if a "History" section would be a useful add, since the different authoritarian regimes in postwar South Korea (and of course the Japanese colonial government) all had their own censorship strategies and priorities. You may also want to check out the corresponding articles on censorship in other countries from the series. If there's a particularly good one, you can use that as a model while you edit. Ctextor at uofu (talk) 19:16, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

Feedback on draft
Honestly that looks better than most published wiki articles, couldn't find anything that didn't make sense. Juwhit (talk) 23:36, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

CT Feedback
Your draft is very thoroughly documented, well-organized, and appropriate in tone. Did you find anything on the present-day? Ctextor at uofu (talk) 15:10, 10 April 2018 (UTC)