User talk:Zeigerdiagramm

Hey guys! I did some work on the Asylum in Germany page, including adding some links and pictures. I also proofread through the whole text, but I wanted everyone to just take a look at it and make sure they’re okay with my changes. Feel free to change anything I’ve changed, sometimes it’s hard for me to realize what actually needs to be changed (aka sometimes I make random changes for no reason just because it sounds nicer to me!) One bigger change I made was deleting some of the repetitive info about the ‘Flughafenverfahren’ in my section and LiquidTemplars.

There is one thing I think we should tweak: The German reads: In einem weitergehenden Sinne wird unter dem Asylrecht auch die Anerkennung als Flüchtling nach der Genfer Flüchtlingskonvention und die Feststellung von zielstaatsbezogenen Abschiebungsverboten für subsidiär Schutzberechtigte verstanden, die im Regelfall ebenfalls im Asylverfahren und ohne besonderen weiteren Antrag vom Bundesamt für Migration und Flüchtlinge mitgeprüft wird.

And the translation we have is: In a wider sense, the right of asylum is considered to be a recognition of refugees according to the 1951 Refugee Convention and also the ascertainment of the deportation prohibition of the current state of destination for subsidiary beneficiaries of protection. Generally, this ascertainment is also part of the asylum procedures and is verified from the Federal Office For Migration and Refugees (Bundesamt für Migration und Flüchtlinge, 'BAMF') without any further application.

Does anyone have a suggestion on how to improve this? Specifically "the ascertainment of the deportation prohibition of the current state of destination for subsidiary beneficiaries of protection” needs to be unpacked I think.

Let me know your thoughts! Ubiquitousness (talk) 16:05, 30 December 2015 (UTC)