User talk:Zeke.miller/sandbox

Dylan's Peer Review
Erdich's article looks very nice as is. Some things I would perhaps consider editing though would be under the Early life and education section. The writing, though seemingly accurate, reads a bit too narrative-esque I think for an encyclopedia entry. It might be worth it to find more plain information regarding names, birthplaces, parents, and more.

Additionally, I worry this article might be lacking a bit in neutrality. Praising Erdich's ancestry, though laudable, probably should not be overly explicit within an encyclopedia article.

Erdich's career and publication sections look very good, and contain a lot of thorough information. The sources seem up to date as well, and the large number of citations gives the article great support. Overall, this looks like a very nice article!