User talk:Zeltzin96/sandbox

I Am Mother and Midnight Sky look pretty good. (What did you think of these movies?). Cadaver looks pretty bare. How would you develop the first two? ProfHanley (talk) 17:16, 8 March 2021 (UTC)

I liked both I am Mother and Midnight Sky was not my favorite but it was quite interesting. I think for midnight Sky I would want to maybe do some comparisons between the book and the movie as a section to get more insight into some major differences in the movie script and why they were changed. For I am Mother I could possibly expand on the reception since now there are probably more general reviews to help add to this section or even adding a few more images off the casting. Zeltzin Lucas ( talk) 13:32, 10 March, 2021 — Preceding undated comment added 21:33, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

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Okay, your sourcing is off to a start! The IMDB and Rotten Tomatoes pages are places to start - - but I think you'll need to move beyond reviews if possible. ProfHanley (talk) 16:30, 16 March 2021 (UTC)

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A couple of things before you're ready for peer review: what is the title of the article?; if it is an improvement/addition to an existing article, you will need to italicize the sentences etc. that you are adding (otherwise, neither I nor your reviewers will be able to really evaluate what you've done);  as I noted almost a month ago, IMDB, rottentomatoes, and the Netflix page will not pass muster as sources ( imdb and netflix are already cited as "sources" on the existing page) - - you have to do more research to find better and more sources. There's a lot to improve on the existing page - - your plot addition is very good, but a better page is possible. ProfHanley (talk) 15:20, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

Hello professor,I added new resources and more information that would be needed for a better page, there’s not too much information so it took some digging. possible. Zeltzin96 (talk) 14:10, 15 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Zeltzain - - here's what I see for sourcing: IMDB, Commonsensemedia, and Letterboxd. Again, these are not very high quality sources.  Have you done a search via the library databases? I would do so asap - - and maybe especially spend some time in the newspaper database looking for reviews etc.  You can also try google scholar.  Lesser quality but possibly legit sources might include blogs - - especially horror movie themed blogs written by objective, neutral, reliable commentators etc.  I don't know what your model page is but have a look at the page for Saw 4 (similar genre perhaps?) to get a sense of good sourcing for movies. Until the draft gets over the source threshold, peer review won't be particularly helpful.  If you're having trouble with library/google scholar searches etc., let me know. ProfHanley (talk) 16:55, 19 April 2021 (UTC)

Hello professor,I actually tried the library database was unable to find anything, this movie did not receive a wide source of information but I’ll try google scholar, I am actually having a hard time finding sources and these are the best I could find. My model page is actually linked and I think you should be able to find it on the Wikiedu dashboard. Zeltzin96 (talk) 14:10, 20 April 2021 (UTC)


 * Here are some places to find reviews etc. of Cadaver: in the library, try the "Global Newsstream" database and/or the Film Literature Index; the MRQE movie review database; the Open Media Database.  You'll want to search on the English version of the movie title "Cadaver" but also the Norwegian version "Kadaver."  Also, I would search on the movie director - - Jarand Herdal.  Using these databases and search terms, I was able to find about five or six decent-looking sources - -the Global Newsstream database was particularly helpful.  (To find library databases, go to the database list on the SFSU Library page.). ProfHanley (talk) 17:55, 26 April 2021 (UTC)