User talk:Zenaspirations

September 2012
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 * The following is the log entry regarding this message: Milton Hershey School was changed by Zenaspirations (u) (t) ANN scored at 0.951786 on 2012-09-13T06:08:12+00:00 . Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 06:08, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

Please stop your disruptive editing. If you continue to vandalize Wikipedia, as you did at Milton Hershey School, you may be blocked from editing. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 06:15, 13 September 2012 (UTC) I don't understand. Were my statements not factual?

Where they are correct or not is not as much of a concern than whether they are verifiable and cited to reliable sources. In this case I reverted them because they are unsourced and negative, if you want to readd them you will need to cite one or more reliable sources. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 07:06, 13 September 2012 (UTC) Unsourced and negative. So essentially, if I were to edit the page on Nazis providing the detail that they killed Jews, I'd need to provide a source - even though this is firmly established and well known fact? Just trying to clarify for future use. Want to make sure I'm doing this correctly and all! Also, how do I properly cite my source for when I do readd my statements?
 * Yes, as I said one of Wikipedia's highest policies is the Verifiability Policy. Which basically says that everything which is added to Wikipedia must be cited to reliable sources and not original research. Referencing for beginners includes instructions on how to reference, make sure that the source you want to add is reliable. Make sure you sign your posts on talk and discussion pages (not in articles), but typing four tildes ( ~ ) after your message. Don't worry about leaving talkback templates on my talk page (but thanks for the first one) as I'm watching this page now. Regards, Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 07:18, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Also see WP:SYNTHESIS, you can say that the school appoligised, but not that they won't allow any students with HIV, unless there is a reliable source which says this directly. Also everything in a Wikipedia article needs to be neutral. Callanecc (talk • contribs • logs) 07:21, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

I've updated the edits to reflect that info. That they apologized and such due to public pressure, which is clear from the source.


 * I've reverted the edits containing AIDS information from the article header and throughout back to the revision done by Callanecc. If you wish to add this information to the article please place them in an appropriate section elsewhere an in a more neutral tone. Perhaps one such as "Position on AIDS" or "AIDS and Admissions" etc etc. Such a section already exists. Feel free to expand upon it. 72.91.158.2 (talk) 02:00, 14 September 2012 (UTC)