User talk:Zeuz3000

Your submission at Articles for creation: Emilia Roosmann (November 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

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Theroadislong (talk) 08:30, 22 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks, 8m gonna fix it with referencea and more. Newbie here so sorry for the inconveniance 82.209.140.26 (talk) 08:54, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Emilia Roosmann has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Emilia Roosmann. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 15:13, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Reply
As indicated above by Theroadislong, your Draft requires sufficient independent reliable sources. They should be structured by using a correct citation template and then add each one into the main text to verify information in-line. I will provide a quick example by using your first bare-url:
 * 1) Subscription/log-in required. The newspaper seems to be independent and reliable but I was unable to check the article to see whether it provides significant coverage. Interviews don't count for establishing notability. This bare-url should be reformatted as  If you can find the author, add their name to |last= |first= Copy-and-past this into your draft; it should be placed after the punctuation (full stop, in this case) at:   Note wikilink the actor's name as he has an English Wikipedia article.

As for the other sources don't use social media accounts or user generated content e.g. linkedin; avoid commercial sites (selling/advertising) e.g. Oh My Eyes.

Furthermore, as this is the biography of a living person, special rules apply. Best of luck with your draft.shaidar cuebiyar (talk) 17:27, 22 November 2023 (UTC)17:31, 22 November 2023 (UTC)