User talk:ZezeJa

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Hi ZezeJa, I'd like to point out that your user page is a space to tell other Wikipedians about you! Places for drafting articles are sandboxes. You should cut andd paste this content to your sandbox, User:ZezeJa/sandbox. I have a few small things to note:
 * Wikipedia has some style guidelines so that articles "look" the same. One of those style guidlines is that references should come directly after punctuation (no space after the period and before the reference).
 * I'd encourage you to simplify your language when possible. It's probable that very many readers wouldn't know what "primiparous" means, and would have to look it up. What word or phrase can you substitute in that would make this more accessible to a broader audience?
 * "Other factors that also may lead to higher risk among this age group includes economic status and education" I'd spell this out. What kinds of economic status? What kinds of education? probably lower economic status and education levels.

Let me know if you have questions about any of this! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:12, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

More feedback
Hi, I left some feedback for you here! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:53, 19 May 2020 (UTC)