User talk:Zha Zha La/John L. Jackson Jr.

This page looks great so far! Here are my notes for peer review, I don't have many! - The structure of the page is clear and easy to follow with relevant information. Expand each section with more information. Education looks a bit sparse but also adding much more information may not be helpful so that's up to you. Add more information especially to the sections titled "Scholar" and "Professional Affiliations." - References look great, add them to the bibliography page. Remember to include citations throughout the page (you have already done a good job of this so far) - Some of the information in the introduction sentence is relevant to other parts of the page, like Career and Selected Publications. Be sure to distribute that information to appropriate sections. - Everything sounds neutral and is supported by up to date facts. Great work so far!

From peer editor: Althea Dulany

Just bumping this to let you know I've reviewed your article and left my evaluation at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zha%20Zha%20La/John_L._Jackson_Jr./Rscaggs02_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Rscaggs02 (talk) 16:40, 9 November 2021 (UTC)