User talk:Zhalu

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Peer Review
Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review. General info

•	Whose work are you reviewing?

Zhalu

•	Link to draft you're reviewing:

User:Zhalu/sandbox

Lead

Guiding questions:

•	Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?

It is a completely new article so yes.

•	Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

Yes, it says who they are and when they were founded.

•	Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?

Yes, it has the members' names, little bit of history and includes some of the discography.

•	Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yest, but it will be added later.

•	Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

It is mainly concise, but has a few details that are not needed for the lead. Lead evaluation

Content

Guiding questions:

•	Is the content added relevant to the topic?

Yes

•	Is the content added up-to-date?

No as the history section hasn't been added yet.

•	Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

There is content missing due to the article not being finished.

Content evaluation

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

•	Is the content added neutral?

Majority.

•	Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

Saying that S-Kiddi is an excellent producer seems a bit biased.

•	Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

Not sure.

•	Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

A little bit for a person to have a positive view.

Tone and balance evaluation

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Sources have not been added yet.

•	Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?

•	Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?

•	Are the sources current?

•	Check a few links. Do they work?

Sources and references evaluation

Organization

Guiding questions:

•	Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?

Everything written is very easy to understand.

•	Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?

Most of it seems correct, but instead of saying They are the member of C.D.C(Chengdu Rap House). I would put They are members of C.D.C (Chengdu Rap House).

•	Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Yes. There is history, members and discography.

Organization evaluation

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

No images nor media has been added.

•	Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?

•	Are images well-captioned?

•	Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?

•	Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Images and media evaluation

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

•	Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?

No, sources have not been added yet.

•	How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?

Sources not added yet.

•	Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?

Yes. It has the content box and the headings.

•	Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

No links have been made.

New Article Evaluation

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

•	Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?

New article so it has a good start.

•	What are the strengths of the content added?

What is written is easily understood.

•	How can the content added be improved?

Just adding more to it so it is more comprehensive.

Overall evaluation

ErrbodysHope (talk) 00:24, 8 March 2020 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of A1 Top Masta(A.T.M.)


A tag has been placed on A1 Top Masta(A.T.M.), requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. Tatupiplu'talk 19:14, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

Nomination of A1 Top Masta for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article A1 Top Masta is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/A1 Top Masta until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. ... disco spinster   talk  13:50, 10 April 2020 (UTC)