User talk:Zhifeixu/sandbox

I think the writing in general is really good and contains multiple aspects of the topic. I also have several suggestions as following.

1. I'm not sure if the way of citing a website is correct here.

2. Maybe the author can consider to add more details on the history of this museum, I think this might help to capture more attention of the audience.

3. Maybe the author can add some picture of the internation museum for helping audience to visualize what it looks like.

WWANGMIT (talk) 17:32, 4 December 2018 (UTC)Wencong Wang