User talk:Zhmurcha/sandbox

Peer Review
Your article is looking great – covering important themes such as morphology, pathophysiology, and ecology. Your introduction to the fungus has a very nice flow; however, would it be possible to add a citation regarding the various life cycles? It might be beneficial to add a reference for readers who want to further research it. Another recommendation I have would be to add a section header on reproduction since the introduction discusses, in-depth, the asexual life cycle. However, it is great that you included clinical importance as well as geographic distribution.

In regards to the sections, I am not too sure if it is appropriate language to say, “As previously mentioned.” I would consider rewording it or re-editing the sections where it was mentioned before.

Overall your article seems to have a great structure and flow – and the image is appealing! I cannot wait to see what the final product looks like.

Student.richard (talk) 21:19, 31 October 2014 (UTC)