User talk:Zhorony

Peer Review
Lead paragraph does include a useful definition and overview of the topic

Key Points: •	Definition of term •	Two types of representative bureaucracy (passive and active) •	Some people support it and some are definitely against its practicality •	Samuel Krislov published a book about the subject that is considered definitive

Core material seems to be covered though it could use some more information

References are provided and citations are used effectively

The topic is clear, however, I would suggest adding more about passive and active representative bureaucracy.

The contribution provides multiple points of view. I would suggest adding some more information to each perspective though.

Good job of not allowing the article to side with one stance or the other.References are provided throughout the document.

The article has plenty of references. They are scholarly and peer reviewed.The language used in most of the article is effective. I would look at the Importance section. It seems that section needs to be adjusted so it does not sound partial to one point of view.

There are several typos which need to be addressed throughout the article.

Simple English is used so it should be readable by anyone.

Hey Zach, I already know you but for the purposes of this class I'm saying hi!

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