User talk:Zhurendragon

Welcome!
Hello, Zhurendragon, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 05:58, 22 February 2016 (UTC)

9 Dragon Wall
Hi, Zhurendragon. I took a look at your draft. I've edited down the bit about Feng Shui and removed some elements where the text referenced itself (e.g. "as stated above"). I've also converted some of your links on the draft into the types of sources Wikipedia articles use. Try to find specific sources on the subject and summarize those to add to the article. I hope this helps. Let me know what specific questions you have. Thanks. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:23, 14 March 2016 (UTC)