User talk:Zion1010

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AfC notification: Draft:Dimsum (OTT) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Dimsum (OTT). Thanks! Sulfurboy (talk) 03:25, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dimsum (OTT) (January 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Dimsum (OTT) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Dimsum (OTT), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and save.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Dimsum_(OTT) Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:KJP1&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Dimsum_(OTT) reviewer's talk page].
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KJP1 (talk) 07:46, 1 January 2018 (UTC)

Help me!
Please help me with my draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dimsum_(OTT) which has not been approved until now. Thank you.

Zion1010 (talk) 03:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)


 * The draft hasn't been submitted for another review; there's a "Resubmit" button in the "Submission declined" messagebox at the top of the page. That said, the previous reviewers' comments about the draft's promotional tone and notability issues still seem to apply; submitting it for another review in its current state would likely see the draft declined again. Huon (talk) 06:49, 17 July 2018 (UTC)


 * The draft was reviewed and declined for reasons of reading like an advertisement and incorrect referencing. These issues have not been corrected, so - if the draft were submitted for review today - I'd expect it to be declined for the same reason. The suggestion to read referencing for beginners remains good advice.
 * You have a considerable amount of work to do on this draft before it has a chance of being accepted. In particular, you need to find notability references that meet the criteria for companies. Having properly formatted in-line references is not a requirement for acceptance, but someone has to do this work and it might as well be you doing it as part of your learning path towards becoming a contributing editor at Wikipedia.
 * When you have done what you can, only then does it make sense to click on the resubmit button to request another review.  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 07:01, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

September 2018
Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Dimsum, from its old location at User:Zion1010/sandbox. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. &mdash; Frayæ (Talk/Spjall) 10:17, 5 September 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Dimsum (channel) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Dimsum (channel). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 02:59, 14 September 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dimsum (channel) (November 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by K.e.coffman were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Dimsum (channel) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Dimsum (channel), click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Dimsum_(channel) Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:K.e.coffman&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Dimsum_(channel) reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

K.e.coffman (talk) 00:46, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, Zion1010. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about in the page Draft:Dimsum (channel), you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, company, organization or competitors;
 * propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (see the request edit template);
 * disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see WP:DISCLOSE);
 * avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
 * do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Also please note that editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. K.e.coffman (talk) 00:47, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Dimsum (OTT)


Hello, Zion1010. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, Draft:Dimsum (OTT).

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. —&thinsp;JJMC89&thinsp; (T·C) 19:15, 22 January 2019 (UTC)