User talk:Zjhjeremy/Mole's World

Hey, glad to see you making progress on your article. It seems like you found a good list of sources and you've started making some improvements to your article. I like the choice of article you've made here as it seems like there's a lot of room to develop it. One idea I have is that if you speak Chinese you might be able draw information and sources from the Chinese version of the article (linked under "Languages" in the sidebar). Translating content from one language to another is an important part of how Wikipedia works. One word of caution is that you shouldn't use automatic machine translations without correcting the errors that they make and rewriting the translations in an encyclopedic tone. Try to make another round of improvements on your article before we do peer reviews this week. This will help you take advantage of the peer reviews to improve your article as much as possible. I'm really excited to see how your project develops!

Groceryheist (talk) 00:39, 25 January 2021 (UTC)

Hi, one question I have is that I am exactly sure how to cite the content I added to the English version when I extracted it from the Chinese version. The Chinese version of the article was linked under the languages sidebar, so I guess I only need to provide copyright attribution through edit summary? Thanks for your time! Zjhjeremy (talk) 00:42, 13 February 2021 (UTC)

's peer review
Hey ! I am assigned to peer review your article. I thought your edits so far are really improving the Lead section! You also found good sources! If you're able to expand some of the details in your sub sections I think that could really help develop this article. I am not familiar with the app myself, but maybe if there are any leaderboards or other awards within the apps that benefits users, or more about who came up with the game and the development process could be interesting to add in, if you can find it. Overall, I think you're on the right track to having a good, developed article! Great work! Brierbach (talk) 02:35, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Zjhjeremy,

I see that you have not made a lot of contributions to this article. You only added 1-2 sentences in the lead and that's it. I would suggest for you to add more information to the article - I have made several suggestions on the peer review on how you can do this, some ideas include adding more sections about the game developer, why the game shut down, or about the developments of the game throughout the year. Goodluck! Qaniaf (talk) 08:01, 2 February 2021 (UTC)

Comment on peer reviews
Greetings, and  have both left you helpful peer reviews. I appreciate Brierbach's encouragement and I agree that you've really improved the lead section and that you have a new good source. That said, as pointed out, you haven't really done much to improve the article so far. She left you a lot of great suggestions in her peer review and I urge to you consider them all. I think that expanding the section on reception by summarizing reviews or adding a new section on the historical development of the game are both great ideas! Please reach out to me when you've made more progress on your article! Groceryheist (talk) 19:40, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

Reply to Peer Reviews
Greetings , thank you so much for your feedback. I have decided to make changes to the article based on the existing Chinese version. In the Chinese version, it covers a lot more details of the app's plot and gameplay. I have carefully chosen some important content to add to the English version and edited the article's overall tone. Zjhjeremy (talk) 23:59, 12 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Nice job translating some content from Chinese! It seems like you're ready to integrate your changes with the live version of the article. Good luck! Groceryheist (talk) 04:44, 13 February 2021 (UTC)