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Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Loo Sisters (July 14)
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Calliopejen1 (talk) 04:27, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Kim Loo Sisters (August 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MapleSoy was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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MapleSoy (talk) 04:29, 15 August 2020 (UTC)

Maple Soy additional references
Hi Maple Soy,

I hope you receive this message. You mentioned leaving additional references in the Talk Page but I seem to have missed them. May I request for them again?

I am also am working on in-line citations and I am using the same reference throughout the article (which I was informed is acceptable)---should I use "Ibid" in the Author Name and Date or should I list each detail for each citation, varying only at the Kindle Location # (page #)?

Thank you!

Zmdrecidoro (talk) 18:53, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi, just a note that you accidentally wrote with a colon, but you'd need to use  to make the template work. I've moved your article to mainspace as the subject is notable, but it would be quite helpful if were made more clear which parts are sourced like MapleSoy pointed out, and if unsourced items were removed. It would also be ideal, of course, if more reliable, independent sources were added.  See you around :) – Thjarkur (talk) 20:10, 5 October 2020 (UTC)