User talk:Zoe.becker/sandbox

Peer review
I like the start of your research. The outline is clear and I appreciate the subsections you're using to explain the history of brie. You need to flesh it out more now. Make sure you're linking relevant wikipedia pages to the section (like Charlemagne and the French Revolution) because your audience needs to have access to look further into the topics. An interesting point is that cheese became the people's cheese so make sure you do enough research on this. Did it have to do with hierarchy? accessibility? milk production and supply? Why does mold signify quality of milk? Flesh out all points with reasons why. Why was royalty so fond of brie?

also you have great sources -- make sure when you're adding to the material that you already have that you vary your sources as well! Beccamiller14 (talk) 02:07, 13 November 2017 (UTC)