User talk:Zoeydodson

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 * Hello! How are you on this lovely Thursday morning? I'm also trying to type this according to the guidelines in last week's readings so this may look kinda wonky. --User:WxNYG — Preceding undated comment added 07:00, 30 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello! I read your page on Gaia Afrania. I think you picked an excellent topic to expand upon. At this point, I'm having a bit of trouble understanding exactly what Gala Afrania is known for, or what her significant role in Women's studies is. I can see the direction you're heading in, but the Wiki page as a whole still needs a lot of expansion. The good thing is, though, that it seems like you have a very clear idea of the assignment and are already headed in the proper direction. If you use this topic for your final Wiki edit, I think you'll be able to make a very strong piece. So far, all of your citations and internal links look correct. I think what you have written so far flows nicely and is in a proper chronological order. With just a bit more expanding, I think this could be a great article! Good Luck! Whitek67 (talk) 14:14, 7 November 2014 (UTC)


 * Hi. I think you also did a great job with the assignment. it was easy to follow your explaination of what you did to the wikipedia page. But I was also aware that I didn't see much relation between Afrania and women studies/feminist theory. I enjoyed your edits and liked how you found a stub that needed information to be added to it. in reference to your paper, I don't see why you couldn't have three separate citations of the same link. I would also be curious to know if there is an edit to combine all three. Overall, I think you did an excellent job. Tullye (talk) 02:47, 9 November 2014 (UTC)tullye tullye

Good evening. I thought your edits were great! I saw no grammatical errors. However, I agree that there is little relation between this topic and women studies. I notice the your references were all the same style. Additionally, I think that each citation needs to be a separate link. Lastly, I think that this topic will be great for your article, but you definitely need to expand on how this relates to women studies. seunathm] ([[User talk:seunathm|talk) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.45.219.212 (talk) 00:18, 11 November 2014 (UTC)