User talk:Zoreltimes

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Katie's edits for Alani
Hi Alani!

Your page looks great, I think you did a goo job picking out specifics that really highlight what the WAA was all about. My only critiques are really stylistic. You write very well, but sometimes it's a bit wordy. Like "did some digging" could just be "dug" or "started setting up" could be "set up," so just look out for things like that if that makes sense. The section on WAA Initiatives is a little bit hard to follow, maybe just because of the number of times it says "women." I'm not exactly sure how to improve that, but I think maybe rewording and making things a little more concise will make it a lot easier to parse through. Also, watch out for editorial words, like "many, many programs." In any other context, it would be totally fine, I just think here it could be a little bit much

I hope this helped! KatieEnidwexler (talk) 07:11, 13 November 2017 (UTC)

Thanks so much for the input @enidwexler! I will get on those changes this week and keep them in mind going forward! Zoreltimes (talk) 16:35, 13 November 2017 (UTC)