User talk:Zuz wiki/sandbox

Copyediting:

I would like to edit 2 errors on the Sanga, Zimbabwe page.

The comma in this sentence should be removed because commas are not necessary between a main clause and a single subordinate clause.
 * 1) Muputa tried to drill boreholes in Sanga, but was not very successful.


 * 1) From the "Villages" section:  The villages that make up Sanga community include Chipiro Village, headed by Kraal Head (Sabhuku) Chipiro of the Shava totem; Madhume Village headed by Madhume of the Shava totem, Mukuvari Village headed by Mukuvari of the Shava totem; Bhadharai Village headed by Bhadharai of the Shava totem; Mukutukutu village headed by Mukutukutu of the Shava totem; and Mugumbate Village headed by Mugumbate of the Mbeva totem.

The comma after "Shava totem" should be changed to a semicolon to follow the punctuation scheme of the rest of the list.


 * Approved. Why don't you go ahead and fix the punctuation for the whole sentence on villages. Each item on the list should be separated by a semicolon, and there should be a comma after each village name. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Josefhoracek (talk • contribs) 18:00, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

I will add sources to the Radical (Chinese characters) page. Detailed explanation is in my sandbox. Zuz wiki (talk) 07:49, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good article. Your sources also look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 13:52, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for adding the sources. There were some minor problems: some sources (Chan) had incomplete references, and the links to sources accessed through a database won't work for most users and should be removed. Josef Horáček (talk) 06:40, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I will create a new lead section for the article [Internet in Belgium]. Zuz wiki (talk) 15:08, 20 February 2015 (UTC)

This article is mostly a technical summary of Belgium's ISPs and other statistics on Belgian Internet usage. A major section also goes over government involvement in the Internet and includes information on censorship, monitoring, and actions done over the Internet that are punishable by law. A critical point is that the government is considered to be maintaining freedom of speech on the Internet while still taking legal action against offenses committed on the Internet. There is a whole section dedicated to IPv6 adoption, which unfortunately consists of a single sentence saying "In 2014, Belgium has the world's highest adoption rate of IPv6 connectivity," completely leaving out any explanation for why that fact is relevant.

Zuz wiki (talk) 17:56, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your lead is done. Just post it. Good job. Josef Horáček (talk) 06:43, 2 March 2015 (UTC)