User talk:Zyxcba123/sandbox

This is looking pretty solid. Improvements in no particular order:


 * I honestly think a subhead under definition that says "difference from probiotics" would be useful. They sound really similar.


 * In the intro you mention that regulation changes "depending on the jurisdiction". Maybe you could include a small round-up of different places' regulations on it.


 * This already looks way better than the current page.

Elcquid (talk) 16:44, 30 March 2018 (UTC)

BA Peer Review

 * add image(s) of examples of prebiotics or diagram showing how prebiotics are processed
 * you might be able to add a section on the biochemical processing of prebiotics
 * the lead section generally shouldn't have citations because it should summarize the rest of the article which has the citations, so you might consider moving some information from the lead section to the body of the article and replace them with summarized sentences.
 * The research and function sections could be combined or rearranged so that they're next to each other.
 * the genetic modification section is super short and could be expanded; if it can't be expanded, it can probably be removed.
 * Some of the wording could be made more concise to improve claireity (haha, get it?)
 * You may be able to expand on the function section because only a few sentences in that section specifically mention the function/purpose of prebiotics.

FacetiousLobster (talk) 16:51, 30 March 2018 (UTC)