User talk:ZzOriginals

November 2018
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in Stock car racing, disturbs uniformity among articles and may cause readability or accessibility problems. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. As per WP:TITLEFORMAT, article titles are usually in sentence case, as the 1973 oil crisis article is. Peaceray (talk) 07:01, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Please do not use styles that are unusual, inappropriate or difficult to understand in articles, as you did in Paradox‎. There is a Manual of Style, and edits should not deliberately go against it without special reason. Thank you.

Regarding this: normally we don't do capitalisation after a colon ( see https://www.grammarly.com/blog/capitalization-after-colons/ ), and the cited source doesn't do it either. - DVdm (talk) 07:37, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

More notes: - DVdm (talk) 07:49, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * another mistake: please check your grammar: Connie sang, or Connie had sung. Not had sang.
 * not needed: see MOS:PUNCTSPACE: "... editors may use any spacing style they prefer (e.g., a single space or two spaces after a period/full stop – see Sentence spacing)" and wp:RETAIN

Your submission at Articles for creation: Zone5 Games (November 20)
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CNMall41 (talk) 08:10, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Zone5 Games (November 20)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Whispering was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Zone5 Games and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Zone5 Games, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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 Whispering ( t ) 17:32, 20 November 2018 (UTC)