Wikipedia:Africa-related regional notice board/Peer review/Date cultivation in Dar al-Manasir

Date cultivation in Dar al-Manasir
I saw this article, and it seemed to be very comprehensive about an interesting subject, well written, researched, and cited sources (which need to be /ref'ed in wikistyle). I've placed it in the main peer review section, and the article's talk page is bare, so I think it would be great to get some peer review from some editor/experts. There are many interesting photos and I think it would be nice to get some review for FA preparation. Thanks. Rhetth 01:14, 6 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Comment I've moved most of the references to standard Wiki format. e.g. there are now 'refd' footnotes. Some of them need standardising though. The article is pretty comprehensive... perhaps one or more sections could be split out into sub articles? I'd say the Date Cultivars section is probably most promising. - Francis Tyers · 09:57, 24 May 2007 (UTC)